coco_12358626Hi Firegirl!!
nice to hear you!!
Toady i don`t have so much work, so i can write more than usually.
Would it be okay for you if i correct your thread above? Just tell me, if you dont care, if it is right or wrong, I don
t want to appear like a teacher to you...
Please don`t get me wrong, your english ist really good, so just with a few new "refreshments" it will soon get much better!!!
I just write some sentences again in the correct way, so you can take a look at it and ask me something, if you like. If you don´t like it, it`s okay of course. I write with you anyway!!
Start:
Im sorry, I haven
t seen your new discussion.
Good for you, that the massages were so helpful.
I would like to have massages, too.
Everybody wants to have more money, but I don`t earn more, what a pity!
My colleague has broken her arm. (I have, he has, she has=have;has;had))
It smells super, but it tastes terrible (s am ende=Grammatik)
We want to get married soon/some time (irgendwann).
Next year we would like to travel. Oder:
Next year we want to got for holidays to the Dom. Rep.(Dazu wünsche ich euch gaaanz viel Spaß und viel Sonne!!!!)
I am really looking forward to these holidays. (Ich freue mich sehr auf diese Ferien)
Some men are more simple than women.
Today I can look more often into the forum, but yesterday I had too much work.
So, my dear. That`s so far my correction to you 
Tonight I watch a really funny video "Schokolade zum Frühstück", do you know that?
My boyfriend is making a "Streuselkuchen" for me, becaue he is already on holiday, the happy guy...
What are your plans for the Christmas Days?
See you!!
Best wishes for a real good day!!
Natasha