Hallo,
Wie schreiben morgen eine Englischarbeit und wir müssen einen Text schreiben.
Vermutlich über [...]

Thema (1) Deine Eltern verbieten dir dein Fernsehen ( No TV ). Fange eine Diskussion mit ihnen an.

Thema (2) Benny und Omar - Erzähle etwas über die Geschichte

Ich habe heute schon die zwei Texte geschrieben,nur weiß nicht ob sie richtig sind. Koennt ihr mir helfen und evtl. die Fehler korrigieren ?

(1)

I : Why i can not watch TV,Mum ?
Mum : You watch to much TV and you must more play outside. Its not good to watch TV for you.
I : Muuuum,WHY ? I play everyday with my friends and i dont watch much TV. All my friends watch more then one hour pro day.
Mum : Your friends my not play pc or go swimming. So i do not care what your friends may.
I : But the News are very important too and I can watch science-channel and not thrashTV,okay ?
Mum : No Discussions,no TV,okay ?
I : please,why i cannot watch TV ? I look never more then hour pro day,i promise.
Mum : No,i forbid it you.
I : Arrrh,bye,stupid Mum.
Mum : What did you say ?
I : nothing...
Mum : stupid ?!
I : ( silent )
Mum : You'll never watch TV again.
I : aaahhh ( goes into her room )

(2) Benny and Omar
Benny is a young boy,whos family moved house to Tunesia,because his dad,his 'da', has work into tunesia,or he lost his job. After the first language problems at the airport,arrieved Benny and his family in Bahama village, ' a walled camp' as Benny calls it -near the city of sfax. On their first day in Maraba they meet the village manager 'Mr.Khassy' who tells them all the dangourus of Tunesia,there snakes and scorpiens. Khassy says that when a scorpien bite you,you must go in more then one hour to the hospital. Khassy gives us a paper,which tell the nurses that a snake or an scorpien bite or sting you in arabic and french,because the nurses cant understand englisch so good.Bennys da get a new car,a toyota landcruiser,from Khassy and he is dont worry about the snakes. ' so a big shiny jeep # he think.At night sting a mosquito Benny and that is bad because benny is allergic to Mosquitos.The first time has benny no friends,but a few weeks later he meet omar,a local boy from the streets and he begins to feel home,omar knows much about tunesia,the 'real' Tunesia,not about Khassys Tunesia. And he tells them that here never ones see a snake,because they can not climed the walls arround Bahama. Benny is lucky about omar and he feel him a little bit beter.

So das wars & ich hoffe es war nicht ganz verkehrt,liebe Grüße Emily